The pie charts show the sources of income and how the money was spent by a children’s charity in the USA in 2016. These charts give a clear picture of where the charity got its money from and how it allocated its funds throughout the year.
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… Only a small proportion of funds was used for other purposes such as fundraising and management. Looking at the income in more detail, donated food was clearly the largest part, making up 86. 6% of total revenue. Community donations were the second biggest source, contributing 10. 4% of the income. Program income made up a small 2. 2%, while money from investments and government support was very minimal1, at only 0. 2% each. Other sources of income formed2 the smallest category at just 0. 4% of the total. Regarding expenditure, program services took up3 most of the expenses at 95. 8%, showing the…
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