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The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007.

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Overall, it is clear that suitable degree courses and quality of resource were around the same proportions in both years, while the reason close to parental had more percentage in 2007 compared to 1987. The remaining categories were chosen by less proportions of people in 2007 than 1987.

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This essay achieved a band score of 6.5. Key strengths include Clear overview of trends and Effective comparison of key data points. Areas for improvement: Some data comparisons lack precision and Limited detail in data explanation.

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