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The bar chart illustrates the consumption of goods by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015

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The bar chart illustrates the consumption of goods by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015. Overall, the chart demonstrates that paper collection was higher than other types of collection during the period, but in 2013, glass collection was higher than others.

By contrast, garden collection was lower than other types. Initially, paper collection fell gradually between about 58 and 40 tons. However, tins and garden collection decreased and increased slightly from approximately 15 and around 35 tons.

Meanwhile, glass collection fluctuated and reached approximately 48 tons from 2011 to 2013. Additionally, paper, glass, tins, and garden collection rose significantly from around 24 to 70 tons in 2014 and 2015.

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