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The maps illustrate changes in the ground floor of the museum between 1990 and 2010 years

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The maps illustrate changes in the ground floor of the museum between 1990 and 2010 years. In summary, there were modifications on the top and right sides of the floor, were added several rooms and a lift, statue had been moved to other place.

In the 1990, gift shop located on the top left corner of a floor next to statue and stairs. Beside the gift shop was a natural history room, and right after had been located museum office with a reception in front of it. The right side of museum had two rooms, archaeology gallery and local history room with door between them.

In the downside, there was a small entrance. In the 2010, cafe had been added to the gift shop and it became larger. The stairs and natural history room had no changes, while statue was moved to the center of the museum. Although the museum office had not been relocated, the reception had been placed at an angle.

Children’s interactive zone and poster display area replaced archaeology gallery, however, local history room remained. Finally, there was added lift and entrance became bigger.

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The essay attempts to describe the changes in the museum's layout but lacks detailed comparisons and clarity in some areas.

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