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The maps illustrate the changes on the area from 1995 to the present

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The maps illustrate the changes on the area from 1995 to the present. In terms of overall changes, the map has shifted its focus towards new areas and new facilities, with the addition of tennis, car park, and expansion of residential areas.

Of particular note is the removal of forest park to create more open space. In 1995, what could be seen on the top right-hand side of the forest park was huge farmland.

In the south sides of map were located some little areas like hotel, café, as well as fish market and shop. In the middle of sea had a fishing port with the charming view. When it comes to the middle side of the areas were situated housing and some cottage nearby the main road. In today’s map we can see some changes, a golf and tennis has been set up, thereby replacing a huge farmland. In addition, shop has been replaced by a restaurant, and fish market has been clear to make room for apartments.

Despite these changes, hotel, café and housing remain unchanged in its original form. Moreover, a car park has been built in a previously vacant area, furthermore some cottages are doubled and expanded.

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