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The graph shows information about spending on electronic goods from 2001 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figure depicts the data about sales on electronic products between the year of 2001 and 2010. Overall, all the channel showed an increase of sales between this period where retail and online sales both had a decrease in a specific phase but e-commerce spending contains higher position throughout...

Task 1122 words
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Some people say the young people who broke the law should be sent to prison, while others believe there are better ways to deal with it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many believe that juvenile offenders should be addressed by sending them to prison, while others would argue there are more appropriate approaches for them. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints equally and provide my stance. Proponents of the idea that young individuals that committed offe...

Task 2309 words
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Some people say the young people who broke the law should be sent to prison, while others believe there are better ways to deal with it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many believe that juvenile offenders should be addressed by sending them to prison, while others would argue there are more appropriate approaches for them. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints equally and provide my stance. Proponents of the idea that young individuals that committed offe...

Task 2309 words
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These days in some countries an increasing number of young adults are choosing their whole weekends inside homes. Why do you think it is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that the number of teenagers who prefer to stay at home is increasing around the world, especially at the weekend. This essay will discuss the causes of this trend and the potential solutions to tackle this problem. To begin with, there are many reasons for this trend i...

Task 2260 words
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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result of social changes, increasingly more parents have been opting home education in preference to sending their children to schools than ever before. In my view, the potential drawbacks of homeschooling are much greater than its positive effects. There are glaring advantages to homeschoolin...

Task 2329 words
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Advertisements

These days, advertisements are appearing more and more frequently in our everyday lives. In my view, this can not only cause distracting people's attention and deteoration of children's upbringing but also provide some suitable information. There are distinct disadvantages to showing up at advertis...

Task 2242 words
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Are students should to wear uniforms in schools?

Many people believe, students ought to wear formal clothes in schools because it provides equality in a society and saves time, while others argue that the uniforms can be uncomfortable for them. In my opinion, students do not need to wear uniforms since it is uncomfortable for daily wear and only t...

Task 2244 words
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I would like you to review my argumentative essay outline

Topic: Extreme Sports Question: Mainstream sports media shape the perception of skateboarders as less legitimate athletes than track and field competitors Introductory Paragraph Despite its inclusion in the 2020 Tokyo Olympics, skateboarding continues to receive far less media coverage than traditio...

Task 2672 words