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The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors to three museums—namely the National Gallery, the Victoria and Albert Museum, and the British Museum—between 2007 and 2012, measured in millions. Overall, the National Gallery recorded the highest number of visitors by the end of the period, while the...
The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors to three museums—namely the National Gallery, the Victoria and Albert Museum, and the British Museum—between 2007 and 2012, measured in millions. Overall, National Gallery recorded the highest number of visitors by the end of the period, while Britis...
Overall, the charity depended mainly on donated food for its income, and the vast majority of its money was spent on program services, which are the core activities directly helping children. Only a small proportion of funds was used for other purposes such as fundraising and management. Looking at...
Overall, the charity depended mainly on donated food for its income, and the vast majority of its money was spent on program services, which are the core activities directly helping children. Only a small proportion of funds was used for other purposes such as fundraising and management. Looking at...
The diagrams illustrate how cement is made and its usage in concrete production. Overall, the process of making cement contains 5 separate stages, starting from crushing followed by mixing, rotating heat, grinding, and ending with packing. The cement is used to produce concrete along with elements ...
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing clothes from bamboo. Overall, there are 9 stages of fabric production, starting from planting, followed by harvesting, cutting, crushing, filtering, spinning and weaving steps, and ending with ready-to-use fabric. At the beginning of the process,...
The pie charts illustrate information about different types of books by comparing their sales in years 1972, 1992 and 2012. Overall, it is obvious that adult's fiction and children's fiction took the vast majority of sale throughout the period. None of the books exceeded a quarter of the total unti...
The line graph illustrates the population in the state of Oregon by county during the period from 1940 to 2000. Overall, while the three Counties exhibited different trends over the given period, they all experienced an overall upward trajectory. However, the pace of growth varied, with some Counti...
The line graph illustrates the amount of gold sales in Dubai over twelve months in 2002. Overall, it can be seen that the highest sales of gold were in March. In contrast, in July and September, sales of gold were the lowest in the Arabic market. Throughout 2002, gold sales fluctuated. In January, ...
This chart illustrates information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents between 1996 and 2005. Overall, car journeys for residents have decreased significantly, whereas car journeys for non-residents saw no change over the 9-year period. At the st...
The diagram shows the steps involved in producing smoked fish. The process consists of 13 stages, starting with catching fish and ending with the delivery of the fish to fish shop markets. Initially, fish are caught and delivered to ports. Once delivered to the ports, the fish are frozen. Next, th...
The diagram higlights the process by which leather products are made. Overall, the process includes 12 steps which starts with the delivery of animal skins and finishes with waxing it. Initially, the animal skins are delivered from farms then they are sorted according to size. Once sorted, the anim...
The table and graph show the number of searches and the percentage of different search engines used in the USA from 2004 to 2010. Overall, the total number of searches increased over the period. While Google accounted for the highest proportion during the period among other browsers, including Yaho...
The maps show the changes that occurred in a science park between 2008 and today. Overall, the science park has changed a lot over time, with several new buildings added and some areas redesigned. In addition, transport facilities have been improved. In 2008, the science park mainly focused on busi...
The line graph illustrates the proportions of female members of parliament in several countries including Germany, Spain, Belgium, UK, and Italy between 2000 and 2012. Units are given in percentages. Overall, the proportion of female parliament members increased in all five countries over the perio...