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The diagram higlights the process by which leather products are made. Overall, the process includes 12 steps which starts with the delivery of animal skins and finishes with waxing it. Initially, the animal skins are delivered from farms then they are sorted according to size. Once sorted, the anim...
The table and graph show the number of searches and the percentage of different search engines used in the USA from 2004 to 2010. Overall, the total number of searches increased over the period. While Google accounted for the highest proportion during the period among other browsers, including Yaho...
All around the world, people who used to live in the countryside are moving to the city. That makes the rural population dramatically decrease. I believe that it is not a positive development because countryside inhabitants are important to the trade and production of the country, and due to the ove...
The maps show the changes that occurred in a science park between 2008 and today. Overall, the science park has changed a lot over time, with several new buildings added and some areas redesigned. In addition, transport facilities have been improved. In 2008, the science park mainly focused on busi...
There are many ways to stay motivated when achieving personal goals. I have been using two key strategies that help me feel less anxious about the future. My first strategy is that I usually listen to positive and energetic music when I feel depressed or demotivated. This method really helps me men...
In my opinion, there are many positive aspects of public transportation for society. First of all, public transportation is cost-effective for people living in urban areas. By this, I mean that individuals who cannot afford to buy a car can rely on public transport as an alternative way to travel. ...
The line graph illustrates the proportions of female members of parliament in several countries including Germany, Spain, Belgium, UK, and Italy between 2000 and 2012. Units are given in percentages. Overall, the proportion of female parliament members increased in all five countries over the perio...
The growing population in cities has led a majority of people to reside in small houses or without outdoor spaces. This essay provides two reasons why living in small houses is a completely negative trend. One clear disadvantage of this development is that it can be boring, especially in summer. Th...
Two plans illustrate the current layout of the office building and the changes expected to be made in the future. Overall, the building will undergo significant changes, becoming more work-oriented and functional, with a shift away from green and leisure spaces. To begin with, the present office bu...
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of particular apps' users such as Twitter, Facebook, and Google+ across age groups from 2011 to 2013. In general, Facebook remained the most popular application, though it's share reduced over the given period. In addition, all the other social media channe...
The charts provide data about how many college students visit sporting events and the types of sporting events they attend. Overall, sporting event attendance is not popular among students. In addition, basketball is an equally common type of sport among both male and female students. To begin with...
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of various communication training that workers took part in an international company as well as the purposes that made them participate in this training. Overall, it is clear that part-time training was the most popular choice, whereas distant learning and i...
The given table compares the percentage of monthly household incomes spent on four categories such as food/drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment in five different European countries. Overall, households in most countries spent the highest proportions on food/drink and housing are the most sign...
The line graph compares the life expectancy of people who live in different parts of Asia from 1950 and forecasts life expectancy at birth until 2300. Overall, it is clear that in all the Asian regions it is expected for people to have higher life expectancy over the given time span, while the numbe...
The given column graph illustrates the amount of aid given by six developed countries from 2008 to 2010, measured in billions of dollars. The US provided the most aid in all three years and despite a slight drop in 2009 from 22 to 20 billion dollars in 2009, the figure rose to $25 billion in 2010. ...